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not good

you need to get a better voice actor, and the plot was pretty stupid, but I'll give a 3 for animation.

good start

You should go somewhere with this. It would make a great series. And It was Great animation.

Awesome

Obviously inspired by shock. You did a good job at recreating it. The only thing I didn't like was the sound but other than that it was great.

Easy

You could have mentioned the shrinking platforms in the instructions. It caught me offgaurd. It's a pretty good game but too easy. The cocoa rises too slowly. I got bored eventually but still made second monthly.

ALERT!!

Gramatic error! you used the wrong form of your/you're when you said You're results are... Other than that it was pretty good, but kind of slow

OK but...

The double jump was too generous. I could survive by holding down the space bar. I think you should make a power up for the double jump and obstacles.

Awesome song

It was a bit choppy in places, but I'm not sure if that was my laggy computer or if it was supposed to be like that (Although I'm pretty sure it was my computer. It's deciding to be slow today). I don't know anything about music so I can't write much more but this was epic man. Completely awesome.